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vengeance's

earth,air,fire and water
hear my hearts call
bring on a storm
one of spite
let the heavens fall

darkness cloak
bring your pain
let him feel the hurt

oceans swirl
raise and rage
drown his treacherous soul

 

fire burn

let your flames

ignite and scorch his heart

 

let him feel all my wrath

let him break and bleed

satisfy my desire 

give me my revenge  

 

 

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  • fallen.xx.angel silver member
    August 3
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    Revenge.. always the best! Very dark and merciless write, indeed.

  • Spiritual Soul
    July 22

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    oooh out for revenge are we? This was great I loved the siplicity of it yet the dark underlying meaning. Awesome write, thanks for entering my contest!
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~