my dear baby boy,
words alone can not express,
my love for you,
that's why when you leave,
i'll always be true to you.
you are my heart and soul,
Forever it's going to be,
you and i, we are one,
we were meant to be.
with all my heart,
i love you and want you,
also i'll be waiting,
upon your return to me.
my love, my soulmate,
together we have found,
each other and me.
our affections to each other,
holds us tightly together
by a strong ribbon,
that won't ever, ever break.
my dear, my true love,
i'll be yours for all eternity,
my heart is yours,
as you are mine forever.
i love baby, my sweet,
and for ever and for always.
love your beautiful girl,
Charlotte
xxxx
A contest entry
- New Favourite? Give me a little bit of you. by Broken-Bones.
700 points, ended July 25, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Release Me by sensualbutterfly.
300 points, ended July 28, 2008, 79 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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sweet and loving and skillfully penned!
kudos!
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I thought that this was a lovely write, this is so full of love and affection. I liked many lines which really conveyed the feelings; one of my favourites was "you are my heart and soul". This really gave of image of being meant to be and being a part of each other. I also liked how you said that words can't express your feelings, a nice way to really empthasis your emotions. The ending was very personal and that was very sweet.
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Beautifully written. Thank you so much for entering
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aww, this poem is so sweet. i love how you ended it. it ties all the emotion together. very good. good luck!
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:"( i cried i love u so much
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A beautiful way to say "I love you" good luck in your contest!
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nice
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taiinfinite
a true heart felt love expressed with beautifull words
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