once abandoned,
confidence weakened,
finally complete with my own family
Author notes
prompt: write about yourself in 10 words
my husband and my children have brought me happiness that I never thought I would have. I have two boys and a girl.
In a list
A contest entry
- Describe yourself in ten simple words (and again hehe) by Noir mariposa...x.
1800 points, ended July 23, 2008, 46 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Simply wanna say awwwww... what a cute photo
I'm glad too see you're now complete with your family, whether I'd admit it too them or not, my family makes me complete too ^^
Thank you for taking the time too enter my contest!
I wish you the best of luck,
Claire x -
I'm glad your now compleate.
I love the imagry in this poem and the feelings.
A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in this contest.
Rose -
oh, great piece. im glad you found true happiness with your family...
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Tell that girl to get her finger out of her mouth! She is GOURGEOUS! Can I have her? Oh, I liked the poem, too...
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You have captured so much in your ten words. Yes, we are complete when part of a loving family. Nicely done and best of luck in the contest.
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beautiful.
just beautiful and heart-warming.
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