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Full Moon

Sequester not my heart in thy embrace
It whispers your love for its darling.
Captive is your soul in my kiss
Tender angel you are beautiful.

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word bank 12: total 26 words + two title words

A contest entry

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    July 23, 2008
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    Thank you for your lovely entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    July 19, 2008

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    You seem to have a moon theme going on. These words are sweet. I especially like the last line. You have been hoodwinked by a Poetic Bandit.


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    July 19, 2008
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    Aww this is just beautiful. So tender and romantic. Best of luck my friend.

    Linda