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Instinct

we were together on mission
silent love took sieze
germinated on its own
turned  fig tree

she jumps like pussi cat
wagging unseen tail
licks my hands
little pranks relieve
explores what is in me
unitended hurts turn sweeter

love binds us
ugly and beauty merge
love sprkles
in shine and gloom

storms make it sweeter
uncharted sea keeps us guessing
hush, hush voice of each other
lit the fire intense

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  • nilav
    July 20, 2008
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    the magic of love well explained here....beautiful..


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 20, 2008

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    gradually developing piece with a fire of the thought..I love it.....and my thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece...


  • whos my humblepie
    July 19, 2008
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    how'd the fire become intense honey?

    Sure do love this poem