Love is a priceless gift...
It's one that can't be measured.
for
Love is not just physical
True love is unconditonal
and
Its' deeper...
Coming from within one soul...
which
When given...
It shines bright...
It makes one's heart gllitter...
It makes one's heart flutter
It makes one's heart change
Love is Unique!
It conquers and rules.
So find it and share it!
dragonheart1
A contest entry
- love... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended August 2, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Beauty is sharing love. Have you found it?
Comments
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, this is beautiful and true... you should share love .... whenever possible.
Nice job!!! -
yes..I agree with your point of view..so true..and so impressive work.... my thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece ...
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Just beautifully penned and every word is true...excellent talent on the job!...wish you luck in this contest...
novy
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Lovely choice of words here
I'm not sure if I can find another picture or BG for it; but I'll keep a look out ^^
Yesh, very nicely written. Sorry I couldn't say more: my mind isn't working
Claire x
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Good
I really like this, you did a great job on it. However I think you should've ended it about line 16.."IT conquers and rules"..that would've been a great ending verse! The remaining poem is alright, but doesn't really go with your picture. Don't take me just being negative, this was a great read
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