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[ Emotions that you'll never see ]

Emotions that you'll never see
Someone you dont wanna be

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Me in ten words....again =)

A contest entry

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  • Illusions of Faith
    July 21

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    Someone you dont wanna be

    such a powerful line, but so heart-wrenching.

    A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in this contest.

    Rose

  • Noir mariposa...x
    July 20

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    I love how a few people are putting "again" in their notes It's good too see

    This is quite an interesting write, I like the line "someone you don't wanna be"

    Whys that O.o ?

    Thank you for taking the time too enter;
    I wish you the best of luck!
    Claire x

  • catie052 gold member
    July 19

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    this has a good message to it. you need to show some emotions...its only healthy good luck