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Love Chains. . .

Missing image
Lost love...
Is like a bird taking flight...
It may leave heartprints of ecstasy
or
Handprints of lost tears...
but
In the end...
Lost love never found
Will be chains of the past.

dragonheart1

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Love is a beautiful gift...when not a lie...a quote of mine

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  • Broken-Bones
    July 19
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    This was really lovely. My favourite part would probably have to be the line "It may leave heartprints of ecstasy". For some reason the idea of heartprints really appealed to me. Through out the poem you captured the aftermath of lost love both good and bad. Great Work.

  • Cannonsfire silver member
    July 19
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    Awwww I love this, sigh....it's just beautiful C