Sinful warrior
yet
to
fall
Without Change
I fail all
Author notes
It's about me being stuck up.
A contest entry
- Describe yourself in ten simple words (and again hehe) by Noir mariposa...x.
1800 points, ended July 23, 2008, 46 entries
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Comments
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Stunning, I really like the use of words and the imagary in this.
And as said before me, I don't think I've come across someone who admits to being stuck-up.
A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in this contest.
Rose -
oh man oh days stuck up is not good, when u are growing into a nice human being
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hehe I don't think I've ever come across anyone that actually admits they're being stuck up. As Mystic said; that can change though
Very interesting take on the words and the prompt ^^
Thank you for taking the time too enter;
I wish you the best of luck!
Claire x -
Well being stuck up is something YOU can change...nice way of putting it...in truth stuck up can cause much pain to other and yourself...
Best to you! -
such strong meaning in this. "to fall without change; i fail all" great message...good luck
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