--Loved--
Inside her heart
Terrified
Opening up
Equals death
“+Forever+”
A contest entry
- Describe yourself in ten simple words (and again hehe) by Noir mariposa...x.
1800 points, ended July 23, 2008, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
this comes from my thawing heart.. can you hear it beat?
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I like the use of words in this, so full of imaginary.
A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in this contest.
Rose -
short sweet this on ses alot to me so few words to describe so much -bows- great work
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good quality of word choices
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Gawsh... I seem too (reluctantly) relate too this ever so well
I hope that this changes for you, it could be good
Thank you for taking the time too enter;
I wish you the best of luck!
Claire x -
So sad and deep...beauty in the darkness...you are so much more then this...your are a light at the end of the tunnel lighting the way for so many...
Love,
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How sad. But I really like the way you described yourself in just 10 words. Are you all right? I love you... ~~Mummy~~
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Why is everyone around me so sad lately sigh
Anyway goodluck in the ccontest best wishes and much love always
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