Abandoned and broken
dust collecting
trash...
memories awaken only
to find shadowed corners
and cobwebs..
Leaving behind shacks built on
False pretences..Ready to be demolished,
as loves foot prints leave upon
the paths of different lives .
Author notes
Prompt: Love doesn't live here anymore
10 poets
10 lines more or less
Free verse
Imagery
emotion
10 lines..
My muse wanted to move with this one.. but I think it flat lined..lol.
A contest entry
- Quickie-PIF-10 poets- Prompt by Cannonsfire.
1750 points, ended July 19, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Jet, I just now read this. Thanks for ripping my heart out... Really that was easy on the eyes. "How do spiders live, hiding in dark corners?"
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No flat lining here my dear...very beautiful and moving...nice flow of life and love...sad with a very strong and perfect ending...
Well done on the Silver!
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Oh very nice and so deserving... I love the lonely, sad feeling you invoke... Wonderfully done!
Ken
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well worded and poignant, good writing all round and congrats on silver
Jeff
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lots of emotion with a reverence to it well done
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lol. nice write for the pormpt, hehe, not flatlined.
i dont really get what you mean by flatlined.
byebye -
You did a great job with this prompt sweety I see that your muse is starting to revive lol Share with me please lol
Goodluck in the contest much love
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Lol.. it was like __^^^^____^_______________________ lol..
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A good piece dear, terse, emotional and put together with a decent diction.
All the best,
Love and peace always,
mj.
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No it didn't flatline, this is sad and sweet and softly done. Love, C
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