broken smile
she counts stars
scribbles poetry about the moment
Author notes
I'm not quite sure if this is what you were looking for. If not, I'll try again.
A contest entry
- anything & prewites by whos my humblepie.
600 points, ended July 20, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Describe yourself in ten simple words (and again hehe) by Noir mariposa...x.
1800 points, ended July 23, 2008, 46 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What be your thoughts?
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Sweet, true and thoughtful.
I love the imagry and the sense of feeling in this.
A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in this contest.
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oh this is a good way to think
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are you saying that seriously or sarcastically?
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No, this exactly the type of thing I was looking for
I quite liked this one because of how simple it is, so laid back and truthful, great to relate too
Thank you for taking the time too enter;
I wish you the best of luck!
Claire x
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This little write is actually cute and sweet, 'scribbles poetry about the moment' could be nicer as 'scribbling poetry about the moment.'
Thank you, this is sweet.
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keep scribbling...you do an amazing job at it. great write! anytime your down like this...always put it on paper!!!!
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All things broken can be mended....i'm sure...I don't know how...you just need someone with a good wrench and screwdriver and work away on yah...hehe...ew....But scribbling is nice...specially when poetry comes out of the scribbles...wow...you must scribble horribly....lol Anyway very nice write. Beautiful in it's shortness and profound in its....something else. Over all well done. Well done I say Well done. I shall say it again Well done....Again? Sure...Fantastic.
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ha, that was a confusing comment. But thank you. I think.
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