You breathe out,
in heavy sighs,
and I breathe in your sadness.
I feel it hit the pits of my soul.
I reach out to heal your heart,
but feel my fingers slip,
right through your chest.
I should have known.
Your eyes tell me nothing, but
the sad story of how love left.
Any good?
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I also love this poem a man or woman reaching out to a love intrest that was hurt by another,feeling their sadness."Your eyes tell me nothing,but the sad story of how love left." Eyes that speak louder than words because they are the mirrors of the soul. The person doesn't have to tell the story in words you just look into their eyes and the eyes said it all.
Great, Great write.
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wow this is really good ... simple yet deep... Love it.. amazing work...
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oh...sadness.
It is an amazing write. Good job.
title suits it nicely.
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wow
yes!
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Very very well written.I too have felt the anguish of having lost someones heart.You have described those feelings for me once again.This is an incredible piece.
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this is just so sad but could you make the font a little darker?? It's sooo hard to read 
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