I am silenced;
Merely a blank,
here,
between (these) parentheses.
In a list
A contest entry
- Describe yourself in ten simple words (and again hehe) by Noir mariposa...x.
1800 points, ended July 23, 2008, 46 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I kind of know also where this one comes as it sounds like me. I suppose it just shows we are just a name to the world, nothing else. Just existing, a number.
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Fascinating...I am enjoying how all of these talented authors like yourself, can say something so powerful with so few words. Bravo and thank you for your entry.
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kind of came to a standstill ... it is very affective in so few words. Certainly does the trick. Thank you for the entry.
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WOW... its amazing how much you can say in 10 words!! I really like that Joey Babe
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I love this, i think it's a true part of life. We all are silenced in away in moments then they pass like when you read past the paranthesis. Your not really even supposed to read them. great metephor. missed you and yay im finally back for good.
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Awww
I liked this, even if it was sad
The set out was pretty awesome too; gave it more depth ^^
Thank you for taking the time too enter;
I wish you the best of luck!
Claire x
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I like this and the way you've portrayed yourself.
A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in this contest.
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different way of looking as to who u are
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I really like how you wrote this...made it even more interesting and powerful. good luck
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ohh thats cool jojo. i like this.
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wow that last word is amazing but dont be silenced come talk to me i miss our crazy talks love you sis
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