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I知 sitting in a place,
A place with many people,
So many people,
All different people,
But none of these people,
Are you.

I知 listening to music,
Every song tells a story,
So many stories,
All different stories,
But none of these stories,
About you.

I知 hearing people痴 voices,
Each one a different sound,
So many voices,
All different voices,
But none of these voices,
Is yours.

I知 sitting in a place,
A place with many people,
So many people,
All different people,
Why, oh why can稚 one of these people,
Be you?

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Something I wrote long ago and decided to re-vamp.

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  • EphemeralStyle
    July 24, 2008

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    Naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwww, so cute ^^ The first paragraph is le best one; that one was particularly 'woah'able. NICE WORK!!!!!!!!!

    Eph