Why do we fumble around like
we are without any sight?
Too afraid to go towards the
truth of light
Stuck within the lie of
darkness, and all those other
unnecessary plights
Caught up within a realm that
we know could never be right
But, instead we denies the
love of God's eternal light
We suffer so terribly at our
own hands, now it's time for
a brand new change
Another day without living the
same
Praying so hard, yet calling
God's name
Asking for forgiveness and
repenting of our sins, being
renewed with God as our friend
Author notes
Being renewed in faith and learning that God has always desired to be our friend is so incredible and beautiful that it's beyond the comprehension of the mortal mind.
Please tell me what you think
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Your poetry and author notes says it all!! Excellent job!
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Wonderfully Refreshing!!!
Hello, Darryl - I love your thoughtful poem, and I am really glad I clicked here tonight (or should I say, this morning). At the risk of seemingly being too critical, I'd like to just briefly mention two things: 1) In the first stanza, line 10 - should the word used be spelled "denied" or "deny" rather than what you have there now, and 2) In the second stanza, line 3 - the word "an" may need to be edited to use the word "a" (just some thoughts). Anyway, you have a remarkable gift and I wish you all the best. Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with all of us!!! Take care. Peace, Cyn 
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This is a very thought provoking and uplifting poem here! Many can benefit by your positive message in this write. This is powerful and well written. Nice! Blessings, Patty
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Beautiful!
This left me speechless! I absolutely loved it! The only word I can think of to describe it is....WOW!!!^_^ Keep up the good work!
In Christ,
~Kayla~
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Inspirational
Very inspiring and insightful. So much wisdom in so few words and yet somehow we stuggle to listen. I love the part about suffering at our hands and still resist the light. I think many readers will relate to your message do to the style in which it is conveyed. Thanks for sharing, Rhon
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wow
truly amazing, so simple and simply put
but true as God is real. I wish I could put things as plainly as this when the situation arises. But sadly I don't -
this is amazing.
i just got back from church camp and this is just exactly wat the priest was trying to get to us. it is sooooo wonderful and powerful. i give u full credit on that,
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Beautiful poem, sincere and flowing. A couple of things could be changed. "But instead we deny the love..." instead of what you have up there. Terribely is actually spelled, "Terribly." and i think you also meant "a brand new change" instead of "an brand new change" great poem though, i really liked the way that you phrased everything, great write!
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A beautiful piece of work darryl, you have my applause and my love. Val
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Amen...
. I loved reading this. My roomates all clap for you ... Great work! We love you! 
Jade Rayne*
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