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♥1 - Heart♥

I gave you my ♥heart♥
gift wrapped, in crepe paper
and a pretty §ribbon§.
You pounded it
till it was nice and tender
and then
put it in the microwave

►one minute, on high◄

"Perfect"

you said ☺smiling☺

Author notes

not really DP...lol...kind of strange....only part one.

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  • devils angel
    July 19

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    excellently penned out... maybe strange tho it does make complete sense and your emotion is poured thru

  • i totally understand your feelings in this piece. i've felt similarly lately.