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I am the rose that
grew from the concrete
to the sunlight I blossom
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I see my hopes and courage
in the strength of my petals
with the sunrise, my soul
profusely blossom and rejoice
to the high skies, I rise
they point their fingers at me
and screaming that I am not
the best patch out of all
but I am the beauty of them all
In a list
A contest entry
- Describe yourself in ten simple words (and again hehe) by Noir mariposa...x.
1800 points, ended July 23, 2008, 46 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - anything & prewites by whos my humblepie.
600 points, ended July 20, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think?
Comments
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beautiful
I love the picture of the rose!! The hand in the background!
"they point their fingers at me and screaming that I am not the best patch out of all but I am the beauty of them all" These are my favorite lines!!
So soft and strong! I so enjoyed reading this!!
Thanks*
Look forward to reading more of your poetry!! :-)
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still loving this description!
yes it's you.
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Stark, but so effective, and typical of the urban landscape--I've taken pictures like this.
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Oh how pretty and congrads on the gold!
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you explained so much in ten simple words :] a beautiful piece. the background is amazing ! it kind off adds to the meaning of the poem. great write and good job with the gold !
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Thank you
Ohhhhh, Thank you for your sweet comment. There is a lot to this poem, and it describe how I have grown up, and it shows how my life came about, but anyways, thank you for your read,
***Hugs***
thelegend
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Thank you all
Thank you all for recognizing my piece and allowing me the oportunity to show my hidden pictures through the art or poetry, and for the Gold Trophy, God bless you all and again thanks for holding this Contes, May be we should join together to hold the next one, lol -
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You can help with the rounds if you like ^^
Sorry, I was meant to ask for your opinion on the "Best of the Best" but I the mods kept telling me off for stalling lol
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WOW, I love the poem and the background is amazing.
A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in this contest.
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This is outstanding! Wow i am very impressed!
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Lisa
haha, I am glad you liked it, thanks for the read, God bless
hey where did you post that poem you edited? i looked on your page and i did not see it,
oh well, Good day
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Oh, wow...this is my fav so far! Great write! "rose that grew from concrete to the sunlight i blossom" not one wasted or forced word! and great message!
Here's a rose for you
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catie052
thanks for your comment, I hope youenjoyed reading this small piece, thanks again for the read
God bless
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Now this is interesting.
I love how layered in meaning that could be, can be taken in sooo many different ways
{Aweshum}
Thank you for taking the time too enter;
I wish you the best of luck!
Claire x -
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Noirmariposa...x
thanks for the oportunity and for the chance to show the world my lame talent, I sure will enter your contest next time you run one,
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Oh nonsense this is lame!!
Brillant; love the background too by the way
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