Overcoming the past's darkness,
I reach for the brass ring.
©2008
7-19-2008
Author notes
Written for the contest: Describe yourself in ten simple words (and again hehe)
by Noir mariposa...x
http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2414655
A contest entry
- Describe yourself in ten simple words (and again hehe) by Noir mariposa...x.
1800 points, ended July 23, 2008, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
A critical comment is invited
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I like this its like you can take it at face value and then think, hey theres more to it.
Simply wonderful.
A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in this contest.
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I certainly hope that more is taken from this. I realize the phrase "brass ring" is dated, but it has such rich, subtle connotations.
rous
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wait the title has a clue! i know it....I will be back!
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well atleast im not the only one that is thinking hard on this...lol. "brass ring" you lose me there.....thinking...thinking...thinking...
I'll will def be thinking about this poem all day..good job...lol.
good luck -
Ah! Freaking out! Can't get my head around it! *cries*
But that said, that's awesome, LOVE thought probing words
I shall have too come back later and look... if not pwease tell me your take on it?
Thank you for taking the time too enter;
I wish you the very best of luck!
Claire x
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