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Destruction

I'm sitting alone
The lights are off
Just crying
My body is in pain

I am nothing
Just slipping away
From the present
Not knowing why

Thoughts are racing
My heart is beating faster
Faster and faster it goes
Can't stop it

I want to run and hide
From all my problems
So I don't break down
I'm afraid of myself

Have I've become cold?
I'm sorry for my faults
And all my mistakes
Please stay with me?

I'm tearing myself apart
Trying to figure out
What's wrong with me
So I can fix it.

By Shannon Rogers
July 19, 2008

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  • pancake
    July 24

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    That was nice. The firat time I read the last line I though it said "so I can't fix it." I was like omg. That is good, good flow and nice image.


  • emotearsofsorrow
    July 24
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    same here

    i liked it