--Worthless--
To self
But to others
The world
Is me
A contest entry
- Describe yourself in ten simple words (and again hehe) by Noir mariposa...x.
1800 points, ended July 23, 2008, 46 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
this comes from my thawing heart.. can you hear it beat?
Comments
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Awww... sometimes everyone feels like that but as long as you know your loved, you'll survive.
A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in this contest.
Rose -
short sweet beautiful loved it sis
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You are worth more than all the stars in the entire universe! You do have a heart of gold. However to love other's you got to learn to love yourself first, no matter what my love. I can not believe that you have so many flaws that you think you are "--Worthless--"! I am always here for you! I think you know that! I ♥ you with all of my heart. ~~Mummy~~
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greate write, Good luck in the contest
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Sometimes, i think, we all feel worthless one time or another...but i feel we really effect eachother all the time. great write! And good luck
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You are this and so much more to so many...very wonderfully done in ten words...yet you are strong and beautiful with a heart of Gold...find comfort in what you mean to so many and realize you are/should not feel worthless to self...
Well done beautiful soul!
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I refuse too believe that anyone on here is worthless; you no exception. I like the wording of
"But to others
The world
Is me"
Very clever
Thank you for taking the time too enter;
I wish you the best of luck!
Claire x -
...I understand how you feel...at least I think I do.... andwho...No I cant hear your heart beating from here...lol....Anyhow this is awesome....good luck for th contest
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you are so much more than just these 10 words as well, you are sweet and caring and do not have a single fault in my eyes.
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You are not worthless and your are useful to yourself you are beautiful on the inside and the out I love you and I am always here for you
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Aww.. that's so sad! You need to love yourself first sweetie and be useful to yourself otherwise you just end up drained trying to be everything to others!
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