~ Desperately hoping
to find light to my
world of darkness ~
Author notes
10 words
Background made by me. No one is allowed to take!!!!!
A contest entry
- Describe yourself in ten simple words (and again hehe) by Noir mariposa...x.
1800 points, ended July 23, 2008, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
Comments
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WOW, This is just mind stopping, I love it.
A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in this contest.
Rose -
I'm starting to think the "light" is the gift of our own imaginations... Where if we need to, we can always see the brilliance, even if our eyes are closed... Thia was great!!!
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wow...I think we all feel like that at one time or another...great write and great background Good luck
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Wooo, twist on words there much?
I like it, very interesting take and inquisitive for people like me who over analyze
Love the background too ^^
Thank you for taking the time too enter;
I wish you the best of luck!
Claire x -
Yes.. I know that feeling! You will find the light sis!!
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I liked the way you captured a little bit of yourself and your desires. I thought your words created a beautiful but heartbreaking image of searching for happiness. I truely hope you find the light you need and the darkness lifts.
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