First Time
Listening to the rain,
open fire crackling.
Holding you gently,
as I love so much.
Touching you as I have,
a million times before.
Feeling the rapid beat
of your heart.
Overwhelmed by the flood
of emotion, the memories,
the heart pounding
thrill and excitement of
a young boys first touch,
of a woman's breast.
Soft, smooth as velvet,
hearts beating as one.
I cuddle closer,
holding you so tight,
we become one.
Each time with you,
is the first time.
As will always be,
with you, for me.
Author notes
By~Maxboy
Image ~ Unknown
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Style~Freewrite
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AWWW!! This is a very cute write.. I loved It!!!! You did great job showing how you feel... Im very happy for the both of you.. Keep up the great work and good luck in my contest!
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comment.
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Very passionate write, can't helped being touched by the words. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed it.
Don
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exquisite
this is truly epic -
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WOW, thank you so much for that comment.
Don
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by the way
by the way we are competeing in this contest so good luck
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my pleasure
check out some of my works i have only 18 on here but i hope you might like some of them
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I love this poem, your thoughts follow a trail ..
and I could understand it. the background is outstanding you did pick a wonderful one for this.
Riftkin
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Thank you love for the applause and wonderful comment.
I am so happy you enjoyed it.
Don
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This is a facinating write! i really enjoyed reading it
very well written
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Thank you very much for the wonderful comment.
Thanks
Don
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Lovely words that flow gently from your pen. I've never commented on a font used, but this one you chose just suited the poem so well. Beautifully elegant - just like your piece. Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored to have you share your work here. Good luck!
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. I do thank you for the comment on the font, I usually get, the font is to big it is distracting and then I get thank you for using larger font because I have bad eyes.
I never know what to do so I usually leave it alone, but you are the first to comment on the style of font. I thank you very much for that.
Don
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this is really pretty.
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Thank you for the very nice comment.
Don
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This is beautiful, great job. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
Don
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Wonderful
So very well done. such a gifted creation. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you for the applause and wonderful comment.
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BREATH TAKING
The sweet flow of your words just take the breath away and pulls a soft sigh from deep within...just nothing like being in love
you have truly done the background justice...niaish for sharing it with me
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Thank you for the applause and your so lovely words.
I can't thank you enough.
Don
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Dam wasn't it great the first time....and everytime after that. Great write and thanks for the entry. Good luck
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Yes, it was/is. Thanks for the comment.
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This brings back old memories. (Blushes) You are a very talented writer and have done very well with your verse.
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Thank you so much for the applause, I am the one blushing from your wonderful complements.
Thanks Again
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Aww how sweet. I know the feeling. It is wonderful when love is so grand that every time feels like the first time. Thanks for entering and good luck
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Thank you, you are so very welcome.
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I want to thank you for entering, and I love the message
Each time with you,
is the first time.
it's sweet -
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Thank you for the very nice comment.
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AWWWW this was touching and i got a little teary eyed. Good job
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Thank you very much for the applause and kind comment. I am happy you enjoyed it.
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Good poem.
Good doesn't really sum it up; very good is better.
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Thank you for the applause and very nice comment.
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So very sweet! Thank you so much for entering
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Thank you very much.
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Isn't this lovely.
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Thank you so much.
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This is wonderful....
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Thank you very much, you are always so generous.
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