"Life is the only real counselor; wisdom unfiltered through personal experience does not become a part of the moral tissue" - Edith Wharton
For the moment passed by,
staring beyond the ebbing of
tall grasses, correspondances lurked-
trapped within itself
And sworls of color tided upon
the shores...
Leaving nothing behind but
remnants of sweet memories
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A contest entry
- Life is beautiful (Options) by Walls-within.
650 points, ended July 23, 6 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Short yet powerful! Good luck in the contest!
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interesting and as the quote said about life, true wisdom, well i added true. keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Very interesting write, wit great imagery. I enjoyed it, good luck in my contest.
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it has been ages that I took the pleasure of reading your words. So glad I did now, because as usual "you do not disappoint". This sets up a certain mood that is maybe bittersweet-with a bit more sweet than bitterMy best wishes in this contest and much love
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