Fallen from heaven,
He is forever damned
to walk the earth as mortal.
Neither angel nor demon,
He is the key between them.
The two worlds colide within him,
in a forever struggle of Angel and Demon.
Author notes
RogueShadow - option 27 picture: http://egosun.deviantart.com/art/bl50doodleNo-8-boy-36635524
Background of the poem:
orignally i wrote this gaia profile and it had a female as the main character. when i saw this picture i thought it fit the small poem that i had written originally. its alot shorter than my usual work, but all the same i think its a good piece. so i entered it in a contest to see how it would do.
A contest entry
- [[.Courtesy of a Raven's Blood.]] by Soten-Jaganshi.
1600 points, ended October 17, 2008, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think?
Comments
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to better you poem
on line 4 i believe you should change demon to man. other then that this poem is great. i do not mean to be critical i just feel it would pull the poem together.
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It's good to see you getting spritual!!!HaHa
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Ah, I love this...it's wonderful ^^ it really is, and the image just works wonders :3. Hope you do well in the contest
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