Warm rain a lubricant
for our desire
our hands slip over wet flesh
as your long soft fingers
caress me hard and
you grip throbbing pulses
in your palm.
I touch you hot and wet
parting smooth, gentle folds –
soft intake of your breath
and lower lip quiver
whisper sounds to come.
In my grasp you writhe
with each thrust and
my jackhammer heart
anticipates the moment
when I finally let go and
explode in you.
Author notes
Trying my hand at erotica -- something I have done very little of in the past.
A contest entry
- Adult {{Picture Inspired}} Semi - Quickie by PerfectImperfection.
600 points, ended July 27, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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*confess* Hail Mary!
I had to read this a few more times!!
ah-hem...... goodnight, poet!! 
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Oooh!!! Wow that is one powerful piece! Very intense sensuality and intrigue woven here.
"Warm rain a lubricant
for our desire"
.. nice start here, going well with image ..
"In my grasp you writhe
with each thrust"
.. ooooh NICE indeed - great intensity here ..
Wonderful beginning to an erotic muse!
Thank you for your entry!
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Holy freaking #%*@!!!!
GASP!
I choked on my water!
This was soooo HOT! I didn't know you had it in you! LOL!
I definitely think you should, ahem, continue your hand at erotica. I mean this turned me red and put thoughts in my mind that probably don't need to be there right now (considering I'm just a little manic and highly excitable).
What an explosion of words! (pun intended)
Good luck in the contest (not that you really need it with this ... just... wow).
More? Please?
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Bravo!
I think you did a good job with this pal, I know exactly where you're cumming from lol, I myself have just started experimenting with eroticism! it's always fascinated me but frankly, I never considered it poetry, it's definately not my forte but I thought I'd give it a bash... oh well, whatever gets you thro the nite as they say; hard core stuff! well all I can say is "what else can you show me?" on the "up side" it's had a positive effect on my love life; my girl wants to know "how come you're so horny all of a sudden?" I hope she never finds out...!!!
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Garrison!!!!!!!!!!
Wow. Oh my goodness. I've forgotten how too type, excuse me!
Amazing write my friend! Hot!
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I like this!!!
In my grasp you writhe
with each thrust and
my jackhammer heart
anticipates the moment
when I finally let go and
explode in you.
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