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Take my silent tears

  

 

Wasn't it I....

who fell in love with you.

Strangers who shared

best friends point of view. 

 

Wasn't it you....

that felt that first spark too.

Laughters sigh of sadness and regret.

The golden rings that sparkled

wedded truth.

 

Wasn't it I....

who welcomed your sweet smile.

Whispered thru silent tears

In another life..I'll not walk away

or ever leave your loving side.

 

Wasn't it I....

Wasn't it you....

We understood and knew

the bold pain we could do.

 

You waved and said goodbye,

got in the car

and drove away

with your devoted wife,

my heart released

an aching sigh....

 

I gave to you

my silent tears,

the golden truth

for another life....

 

I promise you,

I'll not walk away

or ever leave your loving

side. 



 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Contest prompt; "Realize" By: Colbie Caillat beautiful song.

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Comments

  • Such a very sweet write. Pained, filled with that everlasting affection - left denied. beautiful emotion here. The poem holds a great depth and flow throughout. Thank you for your entry!


  • humblpye gold member
    July 23

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    very romantic...

    And a little sad and melancholy too, great picture, very symbolic with the waves parting to let you through... hey girl its like doors opening dontcha think? very inspirational indeed; too bad the castle wasn't on the shore lol...sorry, I.m being cheeky now pls forgive

  • Aww, this poem is really sweet; also a little sad. there is a lot of raw emotion and desperation for love. i can feel how i think you felt when writing and experiencing this. i like this poem very much its very well written with a great rythm.


  • Lucy. gold member
    July 19

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    This is beautiful (and sad! )

    Such a soft, gently flowing write. The wasn't it I repetitions I find very effective.

    Just lovely (pretty pic too)

    Best of luck in the contest.