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Frowning Clown (Haiku)

nose bleeds
on clown's white face
paint runs



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  • rbruce gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    I guess clowns have bad hair days too. Nice haiku, short and to the point, but says it all.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 3, 2008
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    Oh my

    Interesting muse


  • stavykm gold member
    July 22, 2008

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    Oh Sad

    I don't know how to write Haiku. Maybe someday I shall learn. Perfect write and best of luck in the contest.
    Always a pleasure to read your poetry.
    Many Blessings
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm


  • Jillybean128
    July 20, 2008

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    As always...you have impressed me. I love the mental picture I get from this piece Nicely done and best of luck to you in the contest!

    ~Jill


  • azure85 gold member
    July 19, 2008

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    nose bleeds
    on clown's white face
    paint runs

    It could be his nose paint, it could be his poor nose. This does describe the image well, thank you so much.

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