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Reflection (haiku)

cat hisses loudly
arches back while fur rises
mirror shows feline

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  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    December 12, 2008
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    I've seen my cat do this. Good Hiaku.


  • Swan song gold member
    September 6, 2008
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    Lol very good! very descriptive and very good


  • DogFish silver member
    September 3, 2008
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    ...sometimes our own shadow can give us quite a start!

  • celadia
    July 24, 2008
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    So cute, my cat used to do that too.


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    July 20, 2008

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    Excellent

    'tis a fine haiku, indeed. And brings back fond memories of my cat "Abbey", before she passed away. Thanks for sharing this one.


  • azure85 gold member
    July 19, 2008

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    cat hisses loudly
    arches back while fur rises
    mirror shows feline

    Oh, the kitty doesn't like his own reflection, very good AHA in L3. Thank you so much.

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