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Beauty and Beauty. . .

Missing image
The womans beauty shines
Like the glow of the sun...
but
Upon her bared shoulder..
Rest one of Natures's marks...
A butterfly.
So small and petit...
Its colorful wings
Also shimmer in the Sun.
and
Together they both share
God's life of love.
Fluttering their wings...
and...
Seeking new alluring adventures.

dragonheart1

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unfnished..This was a contest prompt that I missed

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  • Noir mariposa...x
    July 19

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    Aww this is gorgeous
    Imagery is beautiful and so is the wording
    I think the last bit finishes it off nicely:
    "Fluttering their wings...
    and...
    Seeking new alluring adventures."




    Thanks for sharing