Tell me,
my life is almost over,
show me,
my pain is almost gone,
The time of our life,
is the pain of our stuggle,
the time we once spent,
is coming once again.
Tell me,
that this is a dream,
show me,
that this is not real.
The time of our life,
is when we shared love,
the time we once spent,
and the smiles i've missed.
I'm coming home.
Author notes
Dark personal pic (:
A contest entry
- ....only for members of the group WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS................. by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
700 points, ended September 16, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - X.x.X-End-This-Life-X.x.X by XxX-Ivy-Love-XxX.
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It was so easy to feel emotion in this, great writing on your part goddad
I quite liked the time of our life is when we shared love
Thank you so much, great work
Good luck
Cind's
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nice work. and good luck!
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http://artpenalization.deviantart.com/art/Sad-News-90848620
let me know if it's not okay..can always give you another
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heres a quote if you want to choose it darl
Confucious - Ignorance is the night of the mind, but a night without moon and star.
and i will go find a pic for oyu, wont be too long
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what type of pic darl..like love or dark etc etc
and I will get a quote here soon
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