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Lithium Lips



The lithium on your lips is putrid -

it's making me feel dizzy...

 

Put me down.

A contest entry

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  • Grey Mouser
    July 21

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    Strongly written with great imagery. Great opening line, that leads one to feel the twisted nature that is holding on. Thanks for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,
    Mouser

  • Disturbed Prodigy
    July 20

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    lover's lips tend to do that to a person, i think this is a good way to put it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest.
  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    July 19

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    Hrmmmmm love can do this to some one this is a nice choice of words that you have used thanks for sharing much love always
  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    July 19

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    awwww there is a wonderful feeling of love within this, that taste of a first kiss that leaves you lightheaded. well done

  • catie052 gold member
    July 18

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    Wow that first line is powerful...full of emotion! Good luck

  • thunder.xx.paradise
    July 18

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    woah this is so creative
    i like how 'lithium on your lips' is kindof an alliteration haha
    i like this. goodluck!
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