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Kung foo

I was a kung foo animal;
a girl was looking for me
but she passed me at the kung foo
on the loose carnival;
It was very very sad
that she would break my heart
if she would do it,
but she did.


She saw something -she got me
a cute little fuzzy monkey and
she wanted to be my friend
a great little monkey
and a  great little Panda.
For her this is the best day ever-
I had a blast.

Then she took him and me everywhere she
Went so she is the perfect girl.

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  • art-angel
    May 24
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    wow


  • Issyboo
    May 24
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  • Issyboo
    May 24
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    ur a good poet young lady!


    • art-angel
      May 24
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      I just made a new poem called izzy the little panda go check on it. its by me go to see that poem.

  • Art-AngelsMomma
    September 20, 2008

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    You are amazing!!

    I love you baby! You are so much like your nanah! I am so blessed that your my daughter!! XXOO
    Mommy


  • art-angel
    September 13, 2008
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    This means alot to me I like this
    website


  • lindaburns gold member
    July 21, 2008

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    This says you are six years old! Wow. Please keep writing. With as much practice as you can get while you are growing up, Who knows? You could be a world famous poet.


    • art-angel
      September 9, 2008
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      Thank you for a comment on july but now Im 7 years old

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