Im walking through the rain
Drowning out the voices
they are telling me to cut
the crimson beads show
as they follow down my arm
and fall to the floor
the next thing i know
is that im lying on the floor
surrounded by the blood and tears
i hear a voice
telling me its going to be ok
i look around and nobody is there
then i know
that it is you
trying to tell me to cut again
but im not listening anymore
and now im wishing
my wrists were bleeding...
The Burden Of Cutting
Author notes
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Comments
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i can relate to this to a time when my friend had slit/cut her wrists. i know that it is bad to cut but dont shed blood blood never comes to you once when its gone. bravo
Miranda -
Very beautiful! Sad and intense thick with raw wmotion I enjoyed reading this piece. I can strongly relate to it so powerful
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HOLY CRAP!
Holy crap this is creepy!! I mean good write but oh my gosh!! Never,ever,ever ever! Ever cut...and if you hear a voice that tells you to tell me so I can shut it up!!lol...I love you to much for you to do any self affliction to yourself...ok! You're my best friend and I don't ever want to lose you...EVER!!! And if anybody you know tells you different than I'll kick their but to China...yeah I went there!lol...but seriously I love you and you know that soo here is a suggestion...stop scaring me!!! I did like the write but no cutting seriously mk!!! Keep up the good work and I love you Molly!!<3
much love,
forever and always,
~kayla~<3 <3
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