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Yes, I do!

When asked the question, "Do you believe in God?"
Most people well, they respond with a nod.
But deep inside they are hurting,
Their mind is constantly on sin, it's always diverting.
They feel like they just can't stop,
Like with just one more sin,
Their hope will be lost.

But have faith, oh children of God!
Don't just look at me and respond with a nod!
Other's may consider it odd,
But when asked if you believe in God,
Scream YES, YES I DO!
Because even in your darkest hour,
He believes in you...

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  • TheGrayWolf
    August 1
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    Awesome poem. It shows that you care for others and that you don't want them to die and go to hell.
  • Yes!

    Fine write of encouragement for all! So many say they believe, but they don't know what they believe! As He says to paraphrase: we are His children if we do as He commands! Remember what The Savior said to the Pharisees: you are children of your father 'the devil' [father of lies]! I'm terrible at quoting scripture & verse. I know what's in the Bible, but remembering the exact scripture verse & words.... I think He said: You are the children of the father of lies, who was a lier from the beginning...ugh...I'm . Nice job here.


  • catie052 gold member
    July 18

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    oh, this one was inspiring...I have nothing to say about this that is critical. every word fits, i think. and theres a nice rhyme and message...love it


  • Poetess4JC silver member
    July 18
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    Roger, you Warrior for Christ you! All I can say is thank you. Thank you for being such a blessing to me and allowing God to use you in my life. Continue to shine your light and you will be rewarded Heaven-style in due time. I loved this poem and the poet who wrote this for me. Again Bro, thank you!


    • BroRoger
      July 19
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      I'm glad you like it little sis. And he does believe in you, Ru. The troubles your facing, they're nothing when they're given to Christ. Put them in his hands.
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