Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Winds of Happiness

Missing image
windmills of happiness
spinning fantasies to life,
dashing servings of smiles
among whimsical skies.

elation glides heavenly
nourishing petals of glee,
adrift moods set to music
sung in joyous keys.

Author notes

Picture Prompt: http://i37.tinypic.com/auxlaf.jpg
30 words only

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 14 of 14

  • darlintlc silver member
    July 19, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This has a light heart feel to it! Makes you smile and feel happy. My favorite part:

    "elation glides heavenly
    nourishing petals of glee"

    Good luck in the contest
    darlintlc


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 18, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Excellent take on the prompt and rhymed well in 30 words--well done & best of luck in the contest


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 18, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    How precious! I had to go look at the pic, it's so cute.. and I love windmills... you have penned the perfect words for it too!

    • Carolina Moon gold member
      July 19, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      I was gonna post the pic with it but it was too big and my feeble mind didn't know how to edit it lol Thanks for your lovely comment my dear.


  • nature mithya
    July 18, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    These words really sing.

    This has a lot of depth for one to really understand.
    I would say fantasies are the creators of love and happiness.
    But to dwell in fantasies of heart beats freedom in the mind is a must.
    I learn that freedom to love.


  • Rclane gold member
    July 18, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Well done Linda. You've captured the essence of the pic and put it into word. Wishing you all the best.


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      July 18, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      Thank you kind soul..you're so sweet. Hope you aren't working too hard.


  • Claudia Incognito
    July 18, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Aw, I like it. I love the images and description in it...it makes me happy. I like it...a little too much v-v good luck on the contest though :3


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      July 18, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      Thank you..I appreciate your comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the read.


  • KayJay
    July 18, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    What a happy joyful write... Such fun... and you've got me smiling like a fool thank you!
    Ken

    • Carolina Moon gold member
      July 18, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      Awww how sweet you are. The pic was too big to post, but it was so cute! Thank you dear for your lovely comment..keep smiling!

1 - 14 of 14