In a weak moment, I may consider it
While I immortalize you with these words
And as long as these days are lit
With no compromise from the lords
We can all see the sun search and find
Behind dark brown eyes of reality
Behind the eyes of the lonely mind
That gives us the holy grail to find immortality
Yet, these words mean nothing to you
You and those few words you have to spare
Since there's nothing but a sky that is blue
And a sun that shines on your back that is bare
So we'll wait for these words that will bleed you dry
For as long as we worship the sky
Author notes
I messed up one line, I don't remember which. My teacher told me and I forgot v-v if you see it, you can fix it for me if you want
Please tell me what you think
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love th rhyming
'Behind dark brown eyes of reality'
darkest...x0
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are you saying it should be darkest? If it was, it wouldn't fit as a sonnet...v.v would it?
-shrugs-
=:3
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wonderfully written, superb flow and rhyme
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