Just a thought in the back of my mind,
never thought it could be real.
Searching for an answer I cant find.
I know I can't change the way that I feel.
What does this really mean?
How can i figure this out?
She's the hottest girl I've seen.
I've never been so in doubt.
Her lips are so plump and red,
her skin is soft and fair,
her hair is like silk thread,
her voice just flows like air.
How will i tell my family?
Who cares?
What will i say to my boyfriend?
Who cares?
Who will accept me?
My true friends. I am me and they are them.
Author notes
i know this isn't very good, but at least it's true! lol
A contest entry
- •○•♥Tell Me How True Love Is♥•○• by XxX-Ivy-Love-XxX.
750 points, ended August 5, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think? what is your first impression?
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Don't say this isn't good!!! I know exactly how you feel. I needed someone to talk to, but none of my friends could REALLY understand. If you ever need to talk, I'm there!
Sydney
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amazing
I can relate to your poem. well done. -
very beautiful write, with much emotion
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nicely put.. i wish i had half your strength..
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very nice. good luck!
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You are you, of course. I have never had any problems accepting people for who they are, and I suppose coming from experience is just a bonus being that I was raised by a single mom who just so happens to be a lesbian, too. What people are never matters to me (as long they are not along the lines of murderers and such). This is sweet and honest, and that makes it very good.
Write on,
Smiling
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lovely write!
im bisexual too if you ever need someone to talk to you can talk to me
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I like this, alot. =] its a great write.
xXx-xXx
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