Tossing and turning through the pain
Obsolete feelings that are worthless
Loving you is my purpose
Inviting you into my arms
Meeting of the hearts and minds
Endless dreams of happiness
Covered by dark clouds of family
Hastily awaiting the day of eternity
Inside the psyche of a hopeless romantic
Cherishing your soul forever
Author notes
You know who this is dedicated to...in acrostic form...I'm sorry for feeling the way I do. I'll always love you.
A contest entry
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Comments
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Sweet words!
Very sweet. Thanks for entering~
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this totally made me drift in your verses. it has rhyme without rhyming which is huge with me when somebody can do that
Absolutely
Wicked
Sonnet
Of
Masterful
Evolution
WTG! Good luck in the contest! -
Words well spoken...thank you for entering
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wow...i just got lost in your words...she's very lucky.
don't be sorry if you feel the way you do though can't blame you... i do feel the same thing too about some guy and was asking sorry for feeling that way about him.
mmmmm this thing called love...lol
i love it when a guy isn't afraid to be vulnerable showing his emotional side
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great write and i hope she read it..this brings tears to my eyes hon.. keep on penning you are truly amazing!
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Another creative write, Darl. Well done =)
Much loves!
Sammie .. xx
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