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*~ Spirit of Enlightenment ~* [Pamela A Lamppa]

 

 

 

 

 

Under oak pillar, seasoned poetry
satiates pages of opened novel.

Fingerprints from 'medium' in view
become bookmarks, feather Light
you place, purpose evolutionary;
guides Spirit with Enlightenment.

Genesis to destination, talisman
in curved creations impacts
sensately and sapience into fruition;
picked - peeled, sampled as seeds
are replanted.

Famished one will never be, only
nourished in your company.

Author notes

**Congratulations Sweet Soul for Your Achievements-
and Thank You for being You!!


This contest #104 is in honor of Pamela A Lamppa on her reaching a milestone but more importantly in honor of her services to the Group Winklings and to poetry, itself, by way of creative pursuit of it and thoughtful critiques. Pamela is also a very gracious, sensible, sensitive and diplomatic lady.

She says of herself:
"I view poetry as a medium that invites one to evoke thoughtful emotion.
I enjoy many different kinds of poetry from free verse
to the traditional school structured verse.
I will try my hand at all types when time permits.
And, I am constantly looking to improve my craft
and share with others."

Reference:
talisman-anything whose presence exercises a remarkable or powerful influence
on human feelings or actions.

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  • Peteskid gold member
    August 25

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    very nicely done, artistic and full of a genuine admiration for a person of achievement, so very well expressed, a very appealing voice of heartfelt affection here... very heartwarming...Thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck in the judging...PK


  • Pamela A Lamppa gold member
    July 19

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    Sweet soul that you are, I am touched and pleased to read such a lovely poem. Thank you. ~Pamela

  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    July 19

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    oh grandma this is such a lovely and beautifully written piece which speaks with such warming thoughts and kindness. well done

  • thepoetssoul gold member
    July 19

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    What a lovely piece of poetry you have written
    I really enjoyed this warming and thoughtful penning, and I'm sure Pam will love it
    Best of wishes to you.

    Tony

  • Arzab
    July 18

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    Beautiful write. I liked the way you ended this with the last two lines of this piece. It seemed metaphorical, like people feeling fulfilled in life as long as they are among friends. Keep that pen flowing.


  • SweetXDestiny silver member
    July 18
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    beautiful grandma
    i love you

  • HolyMan28
    July 18

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    Amazing job, yet again. I really like how you mix up the fonts. It adds an extra effect that I like.

    Nice wording! Great work!

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