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no time for rhyme






wrote a story
and looked into your eyes' perfection
watched my pencil's
cremation:
saw fire light up between your legs
watch the liar, see how he
begs
for forgiveness of prose,
like a soul I rose...
satisfaction in blood my words
cried
and died as reaper assured
with graphite you would be defaced
finally erased.



















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oh, lord. it's crap.

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 14

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    i think this is amazing, and flows so well *hugs*
    stop syaing bad things about your writes! thats an order
    lol. but keep writting
    Stephanie ♥

  • Crap is much worse than this, darling