A moonlit smile danced about her face
As he placed his quivering lips against hers
His tongue became a testament
To the truth he had spoken
A moan burst forth with such power
That the sound of blood in his veins
Was almost overshadowed
But the pianissimo whisper of his heart
Clung to the air with a stunning grace
The iced windows became thick
With the heat of the passion within
As two lovers discovered each other again
A contest entry
- Elegant e{r}{o}t{i}{c}a by PurpleAnarch.
1600 points, ended July 24, 2008, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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congrats on bronze
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A++++
Dear xReeseBaileyx: Nicely written, I feel your emotions clearly. Sorry so long to read yours, I have been really busy. Love, Janjan xoxo
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I could almost feel the passion!
It's been a long time; but I felt it through your words. Loved the descriptive feelings and imagery. Nice poem on passion. Good job! Congrats on the trophy! -
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thanks!
Thanks so mych for the comment! I am glad you enjoyed my art!
TFRB
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