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Indian fantasy

a beautiful woman
a smile decorating her face
meets a stranger
from another place

she is bretrothed to another
one who she does not love
a man who flatters her amma
she is heartbroken yet as graceful as a dove

wearing a sari
her amma made
she meets the stranger
in another place

she falls madly in love
dreaming many dreams
originating from above
she is head over heels

she goes to her wedding unprepared
she cancels the ceremony
and the news of her love
is gladly shared

she looks for him again
he is already gone
she travels the world
weeping till dawn

she soon finds him
and marries him gladly
they now live in india
loving eachother madly



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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    July 23, 2008
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    Thank you for your lovely entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • first forgotten
    July 19, 2008

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    this is has really cute story line. the poem itself has a lot of emotion in it. i love the diction; your words are amazing. i like how it has a happy ending.