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Life's Stage

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Are you part of His divine plan
like actors on life's stage
striving to take the lead?


He's gave us some fine props
painting skies of pastels
darkens them as a warning
when storms are on the way.


The power of knowledge;
His Spirit in our souls unfold
as we build homes, create
transportation for our
curiosity to roam.


Sailing the seven-seas
was awesome, but now
man has taken to the moon.


Most of all I love the trees
providing air, we all breathe
Food we have rivers of fish
and many a tasty dish
Show me a man that can
create nature; one embryo!


I will show you GOD!


Author notes

Qoute: Oh God! the house, the boat, the river, the tree, the sun, the sky, the cloud, I mean everything around me were just the drawings by you including me..Unknown

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  • Arkbear gold member
    January 7

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    Fabulous work here Novy.....this is so creative.....makes me ponder and sit and really think about each line you have penned......thank you for sharing,

     

    Bear ~


  • Frogzter gold member
    July 30, 2008

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    You have really dug deep with this prompt and brought it too life. It was well worth the read. Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest!

    Frogz~


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 20, 2008

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    you can show inded you can show..you have the depth in your words..I love your piece..... my thanks for sharing it...


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    July 19, 2008

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    This is so very true. Man has tried to re-create nature within the science lab, and has so far failed, dismally. Your poem is so very true that nature cannot be replicated at the drop of a hat. She is much more complicated than that. Man in all his vanity, tries to create what is already created for us. Good luck in the contest Novy.

    Darkest
    Love
    Wayne Leon

    xx


    • ennovy silver member
      July 19, 2008
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      Lil' Brother Wayne

      Thank you for reading


  • Brazos silver member
    July 18, 2008

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    Wonderful take on the pic, and a wonderful reminder as well. As he "draws" his master plan, we are all in the picture somewhere, though some of us try awfully hard not to be.

    The only thing I might change is the 4th line to: He gave us, instead of He's give us, but that's just me. You did a wonderful job on this and I can hear your voice so well, maybe you should leave it just as it is, beautiful one.

    I love you,
    Brazos


    • ennovy silver member
      July 19, 2008
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      Brazos

      Corrections made & thank you my love....


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 18, 2008

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    you have some imagination i tell you to perform the work you did for khattar contest here good luck this gavea joyus giggle jot of life laughter to this piece

    • ennovy silver member
      July 18, 2008
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      theredcatjazzoflove

      Thank you for reading...you and I know man does nothing of his own free will but sin....because we are imperfect...you are just beautiful in that photo.....Love ya!...novy

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