I love you

Said so easily

Ment so rare

Easily mistaken

Mistreated, and abused

Gives in abundance

Expects nothing in return

Never says, I love you

She proves it, with works

Sweet and tender,

like the lips that kiss, her silver chalice

To never forget

The essence, of her Holiness

I love you.

Author notes

Spiritual, love, contest
Never believe that easily
when you are told, I love you
till proven.

I love you... by PrabhuDayal Khattar. 300 points, ended July 27, 2008, 16 entries
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DinkyDiver
May 13

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you speak of such true words that people do really abuse this...abusing the word that all keeps us going, and are we to believe it?? some think not.. I don't blame them..

speaking love and showing love is very different and I "love" this write!! welldone
PrabhuDayal Khattar
July 27, 2008

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Yes you have described the truth of this life ...well done..and my thanks for sharing such a wonderful write in my contest...
rhondasail
July 19, 2008

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'Meant so rare'...how true...you write beautifully of a woman's love, my friend...it seems you are deeply inspired ...Peace and very best wishes in this contest. Rhonda
Jalalbad
July 18, 2008
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excellant, I love you good luck in contest.
- Angelo di Luce
  July 19, 2008
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  I love you, sweetheart