Take me back to those memories
When your smile lit the darkest nights
and your love sparked fire to the heavens
Take me back to those memories
When your touch took my fears away
and your arms saved me from the world
Take me back to those memories
When you were there to hear my cries
and to wipe away my tears
Take me back to those memories
When there was still joy in my heart
and you promised to always be there
Take me back to those memories
When your smile lit the darkest nights
and your love sparked fire to the heavens
A contest entry
- Anything and Everything!!! by LivinitupCutie.
450 points, ended July 28, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think [Reward: double points]
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Just perfection. The way that you repeated, "Take me back to those memories," that just made my mind do that chessey 80's graphic you know when they flashedback in the good old days on tv shows? Anyways I loved it, it was jsut so perfect i felt expierences i've remmebered in my life from this poem and if gives me a warm and cold feeling. I want to go back to those memories i can't have anymore....but it is something that remains in the past......PHENOMENAL! Loved it...scars.
. Rewarded 8
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amazing
i love it its very touching and it takes me to a personal memory also you truely are talented -
to lingered onto those past memories that you held onto dearly..being in the comfort of those heavenly moments..wonderfully written and thank you for entering my contest and good luck!!!
Keep penning!!!
Lieu
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Great job. You background is so orange. I would suggest changing the color. Other than that the piece was well written and the picture went well with the poem. Keep writing. MJ
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I like I love the imagery in it and I think you did well
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Great write!
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