watery illusions...
sway to underwater baller
the eyes
hold firm
the soul
cuaght in the stare of the cobra
blue and green dance
in waves
to and fro
hypnotized,
in visions painted mask
lies old eyes
that have seen
and done
and are
empty
Seductress sings her salient song
of sailor's reflex
My ship runs aground
Author notes
Option B
The siren
http://www.digitalpaint.nl/wp-gallery/Siren24062007CG.jpg
A contest entry
- Mesmerizing picture #2 (PIF) by notorious.
789 points, ended July 19, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - My first contest :) Loads of Options, Allowing Pre-writes. Come in and see:D by chilali.
700 points, ended November 5, 2008, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Amazing imagery.
"Seductress sings her salient song
of sailor's reflex"
^^ Well done. Thank you for entering my contest. And good luck.
You have not mentioned the Option number and the contest key in your Author Notes. Please do mention it.
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"caught in the stare of the cobra"
I love that--it sounds mesmerizing.
"visions painted mask
lies old eyes"
Deep...
"sailor's reflex"
Love that as well.
Good luck (:
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