All the things I dearly love
All the things I dearly miss
Are gone
No trace that they ever existed
I miss the nights
With my sister
Alone in the dark
Talking about
Dreams
Hopes
Love
But thats gone
And truely, it never existed
I miss the feeling
Of being innocent
Thinking the things I love
Doing the things I did
And never regreting a thing
But that dissapeared
The day I
Grew
Up
But the thing that I miss
That brings tears into my eyes
Is the feeling
That everything will always be the same
That
Time
Will
Stand
Still...
Author notes
Yeah... This is a suckish poem. Sorry I couldn't do more. Not focusing lately.
A contest entry
- What Do You Miss? by Auburn Sunrise.
600 points, ended August 3, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be honest and if it sucks, say it sucks.
Comments
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bravo sorry forgot the o
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suckish i think not most of these strangers are rite and ur an amazing poet you should trust me when i say it cuz i would never lie to you this is a great way to express your self and in every one of ur poems that i read i feel like im experinceing these feelings with you brav
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It's not "suckish". However, you had a few spelling errors you should check into. Use spellcheck!!!
"truely" - "truly"
"dissapeared" - "disappeared"
"regreting" - "regretting"
Good entry. I understand about not being able to focus - I'm in the same boat lately.
Thanks and good luck!
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