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Smile, for your beauty will shine
cry not, when my days are doom
stand up tall, for our friendship is true
allow me into your world
and I won't mind to stay with you
in whatever form my soul takes
I will always be loyal and true
an end to my existence will come
when I say good bye to you
our treasured memories
those I bestowed upon you
I only ask, that you stay strong
when my soul departs and my body is gone
our memories will always live
and our dreams, those you hold and carry on

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another poem, dedicated to the fallen heroes of our beloved country, USA

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  • phyllisjean
    July 24, 2008
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    like it very much

    very well writen. with great love sometimes comes great sorrow!


  • storiesuntold
    July 22, 2008

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    Such a truthful and loving piece indeed

    I know within my heart and mind those never forgotten and forever loved indeed are our brave men and women of this time . God Bless you all and bring you all home and for those who God has chosen to watch from above we embrace them each waking day with a prayer and a thankyou for the lives they saved . I love you all more than I can say and thankyou for being there to see us safe