Overwhelming frustration,
breaking apart every part of my body.
Neurological explosions in my brain
give me random aneurysms
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wow.. i wrote this like a year ago.. and lucky for me it's 18 words and somehow fits your prompt haha.
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"Neurological explosions in my brain
give me random aneurysms"
I like this... it's oddly disturbing, but very endearing.
Shelly
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"Neurological explosions in my brain
give me random aneurisms."
"aneurisms" should be "aneurysms"
ahah.
It's freakin amazing though :]
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i think it can be spelt both ways.. but your way looks cooler haha
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woahhh is it really spelled like that :|
my computer didnt fix it for me :S
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hey i just noticed theres kind of alliteration
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Fascinating!
An emotional piece. Wonderful write. Thank you for your entry and best of luck in my contest. -
i like:
Neurological explosions in my brain
give me random aneurisms.
well if i had to say all the parts i liked i would type out the whole poem.. but u know.
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Oh boy random ones! I like the last line Awesome!!!
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